Alone in Pain

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Alone in Pain

03 Jun 2010 00:13:09

<--- Mood swings before the meet
---> Breakup

Note: Just an outburst of emotions... when i was alone at 12 midnight...

It hurts when you are left out...
I felt the same last day ...

Dont know the feeling was so bad...
It created a sense of a feeling very sad...

Can i express myself to you ...
I never was given a chance by you...

Should i hold myself as good...
I was made realize that i am bad...

Nothing i did you behaved like this...
What would have happened if i were this...

Strange feeling of being alone..
Has embraced me from all one...

Am i destined to be alone without you...
May be yes i am forced by you...

Please forgive me if i was wrong...
Like a big heart can you break this tong...

I want to talk to you again...
Like the fresh pouring rain...

Am i worth to be given another chance...
It is painful to be alone in this avalanche...

Dont keep me waiting ...
My inner self is paining...

I am not able to hide the moist in my eye...
I will keep it till you bring your hands to dry...

Moral : Will the pain fade away soon.

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Niki Says:
03 Jun 2010 at 00:24:38

Who is hurting you? can i make some guesses...

Kamaljeet Singh Says:
03 Jun 2010 at 09:33:28

nice expression of emotions...keep it up buddy

Bharath Says:
03 Jun 2010 at 10:09:09

Is this Pain is just by a frnd./././

sandy Says:
03 Jun 2010 at 10:33:30

nice lines ..

Guna Says:
03 Jun 2010 at 10:54:59

Don't feel dear.. We are all with you...

Ketan Says:
04 Jun 2010 at 14:04:46

@Niki - You cannot make any guesses
@Kamaljeet Singh - Thank you mate
@Bharath - Hah ha ha..who should i say..
@Sandy - Thanks mate
@Guna - Thank you

nethra Says:
04 Jun 2010 at 23:37:41

Truly sad! (

Ketan Says:
05 Jun 2010 at 19:36:16

@Nethra Yes it was a sad moment

Anup Says:
07 Jun 2010 at 17:38:28

Dont worry Ketan..everything will be alright !!

Sunanda K Says:
07 Jun 2010 at 21:30:02

The poem is awesome :)

Ketan Says:
09 Jun 2010 at 14:36:09

@Anup: Thanks man

@Sunanda K :Thank you very much

Vidya Says:
02 Jul 2010 at 15:43:18

gud poem.....bt hope its nt by true emotions....

Ketan Says:
03 Jul 2010 at 01:02:55

@Vidya : Thank you for the appreciation. It is the emotion matters. Whether it is true or created or imagined. What it matters the writing creates the magic of real. Enjoy.

niraj Says:
14 Jul 2010 at 21:02:31